Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Concept 29 Brainstormer

#2

INT. - PARENT'S CAR - NIGHT

MR. and MRS. JOE are conversing on how the night went.

                                                              MRS. JOE
                                                  It was nice to see those two
                                                  again.  It's been SUCH a long
                                                  time since we had a good con-
                                                  versation like that.

                                                               MR. JOE
                                                   Yup.

INT. - JOE'S HOUSE - NIGHT
INTERCUT CLEANING SEQUENCE

JOE is standing in the middle of his living room, a mess and in shambles compared to what it had looked like a few hours ago.  Joe knows his parents must be coming home by now, since it is a few minutes after 10:00pm.  Joe surveys the scene of the crime.

                                                                JOE (V.O.)
                                                        Oh boy... what a night.

He hurriedly begins to clean up the room.  Just as he is starting to get some progress towards removing all evidence of his party, the phone rings.  Joe hesitates for a second, then walks over to pick it up.

                                                                JOE
                                                                     (nervously)
                                                        Hello?
    
      

                                                      END

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