Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Short Script Revision

Bar Fight Scene

                                                Javix
                          Four guys right behind us.
                          Look sharp and keep calm, 
                          maybe they just want to talk.
 
                                                Alec
                          I don't think they're looking for
                          a nice conversation over some
                          beer. 

TOUGH GUY walks up behind them and eyes Javix with a mean look on his dirty face.

                                                TOUGH GUY
                          Are you Javix?  

                                                Javix
                          Who's asking?  

                                                Tough Guy
                          Someone wants you dead, and that
                          person's willing to pay some big
                          amounts of credits to have it done.
            
                                                Javix
                          Look, we don't want any trouble and
                          I don't think you want to mess with us.

Alec leans toward Javix.

                                                Alec
                          Looks like they're anxious to get at us.

                                                Tough Guy
                          We'll see about that, get 'em boys!

The men can wait no longer and jump the pair and attempted to pull their shirts and force them out of their seats.  

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